WIP - School project Heroes of Armanond

Moved this thread to Work in progress C:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MlaSvNYyLnM <-- Video link

Hey Guys i just made my fifth Diary so for you that are intressted in following a project you should really check my channel out =)

Comment on what you like or dislike

Cheers - Utaelilya !

 

That looks pretty good but I personally don't like the toonshader with a black outline.

 

It looks good so far, the problems i have with this is

Pros
1. the interface looks very good
2 the character control is smooth

Cons
1. the toon outline looks horrible ( this may be my opinion )
2. i don't know what unity licence you're using but the shadows are terrible and " block-ish"
3. your character seems to be floating a little

I hope you don't take this personally

just some criticism

Mellow Ninja

 

@MellowNinja , Thanks for replying , I might change the outliner and the shadows are becouse im running the game with simple (For the video) so thats no problem without recording C:
Floating character fixed xD
Im not taking it personally , criticism = Experience

@yavadoo , Thanks for replying to =) , I might change the outlines , ill ask my groupmembers ^^

 

Oh I apologize about the shadow quality, and great

 

Hehe no problem
Im acctually thinking off taking away the Toonshader , now that people are saying it dosnt look that good im having some weird thought to C:

 

That would probably be best, but what look are you going for ? realistic or toon ?

 

I think Realistic is better...Havent tried yet tho , it might be horrible ^^

 

Update!

New video at the top =)
Lots of new stuff C: