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Games The Machines

Discussion in 'Works In Progress - Archive' started by Spookytooth3D, Jan 7, 2018.

  1. Spookytooth3D

    Spookytooth3D

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    This is a concept piece for a story I have written...Thanks for watching... more to come!

    The Machines:


    Mike
    "Darbone - Legend of The Four"
     
    Spookytooth3D, Jan 7, 2018
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  2. theANMATOR2b

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    Beautiful but aside from the floating particles, it is noticeably static. Some bugs, or birds or subtly moving plants would enhance the already beautiful scene.
     
    theANMATOR2b, Jan 19, 2018
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  3. Spookytooth3D

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    Thanks for the comment and for taking a look. Granted there should be much more life to the scene, but there are about 50+ pidgeon sized birds flicking through the forest. More noticeable on some shots than others. Insects are in progress...good call!

    Cheers
     
    Spookytooth3D, Jan 19, 2018
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  4. theANMATOR2b

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    One "hero" jungle bird landing on a branch in the foreground/mid ground and looking around - maybe plucking up a certain insect would really add some extra life, though it may also detract from your desired message. Either way - I'll look forward to the next iteration. :)
     
    theANMATOR2b, Jan 19, 2018
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  5. Spookytooth3D

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    I'll have to enlarge the owl screen left on the branch of the 3rd shot. haha... thanks for the feedback... stay tuned!
     
    Spookytooth3D, Jan 28, 2018
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