systematic

hi all
i'm new here so sorry if this is the wrong place for this.
i'm still a Beginner in unity and all its features so please go easy on me
i wanted to do a game for a project in some course, the thing is i have pretty much everything about it thought out but when i presented it for the teacher to get his approval he said it's good but it needs to be more systematic.

i could not understand what he meant by that.

i have some points that explain about the game if someone can read them and tell me how to make it more systematic i would be grateful for thy

sorry for bad English it is not my native language XD

 

I don't know what your teacher means by that. It looks like a pretty good plan to me. I think you will have to ask your teacher. Consider sending email, if that is easier for you than speaking.

Out of curiosity, what is your native language?

 

aha..... thanks for the reply

my native language is Arabic

 

Ah, if it were Japanese I would try helping you out in your own language. But I'm no good at Arabic!

But good luck with your game, it sounds like a very nice project to me.

 

thank you