Steam GreenLight project with Unity

Hi guys, I made this game with Unity and PlayMaker . Unity is a power game engine that i like it very much! and Playmaker is the greate tool that help me to do what I want to do ,they are awesome!

My game has came out on Steam Greenlight,if you interesting on it ,please hit the Yes button for me,thanks! Here is the address:
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=386723457

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..I'd remove the bit about your family and working at night and such at the start. It's really cheesy and pan-handle-y, and overall un-professional.

 

Yeah it makes it seem like your reason for making the game wasn't because you wanted to make a great game; instead it comes across like you did it just to make money and are trying to convince people of how hard it was, family to support and so forth.

 

I think you should invest in some art and rework the trailer

 

And should be in showcase section

 

Game looks great!!! Good luck on steam.

Do you mind telling me if you are using Unity Pro or Indie? and what package you used for Steam integration?

 

Yea right that was my favorite part.
As soon as I saw that I got instantly hooked.
Was very creative and I enjoyed it.