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Slender City - WIP

Discussion in 'Works In Progress - Archive' started by DAGames, Nov 29, 2012.

  1. DAGames

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    Hi. Im David from D.A. Games. And yes, I am creating a remake of the slender game but TOTALLY DIFFERENT!

    INFO
    In this slender you will play a man that has spent his whole life searching for slender. About 2 years back slender man had taken his family and slaughtered everyone of them. AND YOU WANT REVENGE!!! So in order to find him you must go to were it all started. Slender's home town. Otherwise known by the locals who used to live there, SLENDER CITY! The town is now just an abandoned wasteland and it is full of secrets that slender doesn't want you to find out.

    Inventory

    Flashlight
    Camera
    Hand-Held Recorder

    *Edit* The name has been changed from Slender City to Slender Hill
     
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  2. dtg108

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    Sounds unique, I'm following!
     
  3. I am da bawss

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    Don't mind me saying....but I was laughing out loud when I read the title.
    Slender City just sounds like a comedy instead of a horror.

    I will do one better.....How about Slendertropolis? :D
     
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  4. khanstruct

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    Is there a reason it has to be Slender anything? Can't you just come up with your own creepy, pseudo-supernatural killer? Seriously, let's stop with all this Slender nonsense.

    The concept does sound interesting, by the way. I think the name "Slender" puts a bad light on it.
     
  5. Lord Darkshayde

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    Absolutely agreed! While it is an interesting concept to drive the game by wanting revenge on the supernatural force that took the character's family we really need less Slender. Don't get me wrong, Slender was absolutely awesome in its simplicity and ability to instill fear with a light touch, but let's get real here. It was effectively a demo! Not all horror games developed with Unity need to be Slender-based and all the people that want to create a horror game need to go do some reading on real horror like H.P. Lovecraft, Stephen King, Clive Barker, etc.... Stop trying to ride the coat-tails of another team's ideas and take some time to come up with something at least semi-original please.

    ::Steps down and packs up the soapbox::
     
  6. DAGames

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    Yea. I'll think about a new title

    I've had this concept for a while. I'll try to make it as different from the original as possible

    Thanks for the support
     
  7. wmgcata

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    If this is supposed to be a horror game then you might want to change your title. Slender City sounds a bit to childish to my liking.

    Concept does sound awesome though!

    -Tim
     
  8. DAGames

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    Thanks for the feedback. Im thinking about calling it Slender Road or something else
     
  9. DAGames

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    I plan on splitting the game into chapters. Here's what names I have so far:

    Chapter 1- The Beginning
    Chapter 2- Cruelty
    Chapter 3- Dead Buried
    Chapter 4- Rising
    Chapter 5- Torment

    ~David Akers (D. A. Games)
     
  10. CazicThule

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    So... like this?

     
  11. HolBol

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    Change slendy to something else and I'll be happy ;).
     
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  14. I am da bawss

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    Now you getting somewhere. "Road" is more ominous than city. It almost reminds me of the word "hill"....


    "Slender Hill" !!


    :D :D :D
    (Now that's gotta be a winner there!)



    Isn't that "Rory Harvey" the notorious guy who rides on the coattails of Agent Parsec's original Slender game?
    He cloned "Slender" and made it to top 10 of the App Store and started this Slender cloning mess on App Store and everywhere else.

    Now if you (DAGames) clone his "Street of Slender" (hey you almost got it with the word "road"!!) it make Rory taste his own medicine! It will be justice! So I support you! :D Do it !
     
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  15. DAGames

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    Thanks for da feedback. Thats a great name and im gonna us it. Thanks!

    I totally agree
     
  16. wolfstien786

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    If your city is a wasteland then how come your roads are so well maintained :p
     
  17. wccrawford

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    Because nobody's using them, of course!
     
  18. DAGames

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    NEW UPDATES

    1. How you find Slender Hill:
    a. Hear Train Track sound
    b. Follow Train Track
    c. Follow until You see a town
    d. Sign Will Say: Welcome To Feildburg
    e. YOU HAVE ENTERED!!!

    2. During the search for Slender Hill you hear footsteps don't see slender

    3. Game will come after demo

    4. Game Demo will BOTH be free

    Thanks,
    ~David Akers (D. A. Games)
     
  19. Aiursrage2k

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    Yeah not only that but he also is a unity forum member.
     
  20. DAGames

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  21. I am da bawss

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    Impeccable logic. I like you.
     
  22. imaginaryhuman

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    The title suggests to me... there's a city containing lots of slenders?
     
  23. Myhijim

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    I think your onto something!

    Instead of ONE slender you have TWENTY!

    That will for sure make it origional again! :p
     
  24. AndrewGrayGames

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    First point of order: at least this guy has something. Most of the Slenders (that I make fun of) have just a (short) wall of text. The Slender cloners are learning to make something first, it seems! This is moving in a more positive direction.

    Second: Multiplayer horror. Now, this is getting interesting. He could be onto something again. If there's one thing players love, it's being scared. If there's two things, it's sneaking up on other players, and being scared (in that order...probably. I'm a wuss so you know.)

    If this guy plays his cards right, he could be able to hijack the Slender IP and do something radical: a PvP game where scaring the crud out of people becomes the mark of how well you've done. I have to take my hat off to that prospect, and hope the developer does something hitherto unseen!
     
  25. I am da bawss

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    No, its a city containing lots of these :


     
  26. dtg108

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    I am da bawss, I like you (no homo, I swear.)
     
  27. AndrewGrayGames

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    You really are the boss!
     
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    Why does this have to be slender? Serious this could be your own completely original idea.
     
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    And then you find out half way through that slenderman died like seven years ago but there must always be a slender man... and now the slender man is.... YOUR SON, and deciding to break the curse put on him you must kill him yourself becoming the slenderman, but you lure him out of the city into the woods (Were slender by parsec is located) were you need to do an exorcist on him(like keep him locked for a certain amount of time as the spell works) and then the final level is a face off of a ghost like rendition of Slendy inside of your soul leading to your body being possessed and transforming into him!
     
  30. pivotraze

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    It's not Slender. It's something completely different.
     
  31. TehWut

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    Sorry, at this point a slender game cannot be original.

     
  32. pivotraze

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    A game that copies Slender's mechanics? No.

    A game that uses Slenderman in a unique way? Yes.
     
  33. DAGames

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    Here is somthing im a little sceptic on. I want to make it were slender was once a disformed human who fed on the fear of children up till the time when the raging villagers chased him into the woods and tortchured and killed him. Then he comes back as a demon who wants revenge. But im not sure how that would play out. Let me know

    ~David Akers (D. A. Games)
     
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    Looks Good! I like the idea of giving Slender a history.
     
  36. DAGames

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    UPDATE

    This is only a few updates but there important

    1. SAVE LOAD!!! (When you walk up to a Typewriter it automatically saves the game for you)

    2. Optional: I'm thinking about putting in a gun that is not used to kill slender but to slow him down for a quick escape. If it will be put in the game you will only find it toward the end!!!
     
  37. AndrewGrayGames

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    HA! You are now no longer a Slender clone! ...You're now a Resident Evil clone :p

    Now, this is interesting. As a gamer, when you're just learning about Slenderman, and he tries killing you for the first time, I don't think I'd wait until near the end; actually, I'd give this to the player first. Give the player the ability to kill Slenderman later. Reason I say this? Slowing Slender, but not killing him helps anti-assure the player that they are in any form of control, thus improving the fear factor.

    Seriously, though, good stuff bro!
     
  38. DAGames

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    UPDATE #2


    1. Sense my SketchUp Modeling program is working again i can get started on the buildings. (Part SketchUp and part Blender)

    Here is one of the sample test buildings in the game:

    $Building_1.jpg


    2. I'm thinking about converting the flashlight to a LED flashlight, You know...to modernize it.


    Thanks,
    DAGames
     
  39. DAGames

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    RESPONSES

    Heyyyyyyyy! I haven't responded to comments in a while so i think ill start doing this if i don't have enough time to address them singly:

    Thanks for the support


    lol


    Refer to the next quote



    Exactly



    Exactly...AGAIN!!!



    Well im happy that now i know im on the right track



    Thanks for da support bro!!!


    Thanks Everyone,
    DAGames
     
  40. DAGames

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    Hey guys. ive got some good news for me and some bad news for u. The bad news is that i dont wanna rip people off by taking there ideas. i want to do somthing original. So the good news is i am doing somthing origional. I am making a zombie game called ZDay on Alcitraz. Imma put up a thread about it. Thanks.
     
  41. pivotraze

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    Because a Zombie game is more original than a Slenderman game.
     
  42. Christiaan

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    seriously ? zday? or are u trolling ?
     
  43. DAGames

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    deal wit it.
     
  44. Christiaan

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    i dont care what you do, but you have heard of dayz right?
     
  45. DAGames

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    Yes I have. I'm probably gonna change the name.
     
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    It's back on! I've been getting some pretty rude remarks about not finishing this. And so far i've left behind every project to star a new one so imma finish this one. Development starts January 1st 2013 and wont end till the game is done. Thanks.
     
  49. DAGames

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    Hey guys. Im working on a website for Slender Hill and i should have a basic one up by 7 pm or maybe earlier. So Keep your eye out for a post in a few hours. Thanks
     
  50. DAGames

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    Hey Guys!!! New Update. I've put together a gas station model. I need someone to texture it though. Here it is:
     

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