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Seeking Advice on Character Design

Discussion in 'Works In Progress - Archive' started by FancifulFox, Feb 10, 2015.

  1. FancifulFox

    FancifulFox

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    I am designing a character for a 2D fairy-tale game with a bit of a dark/spooky theme, and we are trying to create a 9 year old little boy with a bowl cut for the player character.

    I thought I was successful in drawing a little boy, but I've been told that it looks like a little girl with make-up. I was trying to make the character look tired and worn out, but still young.

    Any thoughts or advice would be greatly appreciated.

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  2. virror

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    I think its the eyes and mouth that makes it look like a girl, i think the black around the eyes makes ppl think about makeup and somehow the mouth also looks a bit girlish.
    Hard to tell exactly why though : )
     
  3. theANMATOR2b

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    I think virror hit all the points I was going to make. Also may want to bring the hair line closer to the brows and possibly have a couple stray clumps dropping down further.
    It's definitely the eyes, brow and the mouth.
     
  4. Schneider21

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    Agreed with @virror and @theANMATOR2b. Definitely has a lady-boy kind of vibe to it. If I could expound on what they've said a little bit, I would also say the chin has a feminine quality to it. When I think of a young boy, I think of a soft, rounded face, not a tapering, delicate chin.

    Personally, I have the opposite problem with my characters. I can never make my women look girly enough! They look like guys with long hair, haha.
     
  5. Gnimmel

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