My first project!

Hey guys I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my storyline I'll update this thread as I progress through the building of my project

Well this is my first game for one thing and well I was looking at starting a survival horror game kinda like that game called "the forest" its about when a guy go's on a cruise with his family and the boat encounters a crazy storm that sinks the boat and he wakes up on a mysterious island with nothing and you have to build/create using what the island provides to survive and escape

But the island holds many secrets and horrors as you play more and more you find out that the island used to be a place where a cult was running and would do sacrifices and worship Satan but one day there was a mass suicide of the cult so the island is haunted by demonic spirits and things

 

At first totally sounded like a clone of "the forest" until you talked about demonic spirits and such, I think its a cool idea, but youre going to have to really capitalize on your spirit things

 

Thanks! I will get more into that a bit later after I figure out who can help me with it but I'm pretty low on cash and have to care for my son and girlfriend so I'm trying to find some people that would wanna be apart of this project and get shares of the project once released

 

Wish you good luck I like the story