Games Lonely Adventure - Feedback for the teaser needed :)

Hi,

I am working (very hard...) on a teaser for a game. I like it (because I am an author) but other people says it's bad.

Please watch and maybe give feedback how to make it better

Thanks in advance!

 

Why can't you post some media here, screens/video? Maybe that gets you some feedback.

 

I watched it, I'm not sure I understand. Is the meteor heading towards earth? If so, that's not very clear to me.

I feel the "Let it go" line isn't really needed, and it just reminds me of Frozen

Regarding this line: "It's not the worst danger we have to face"
I respect avoiding the cliche "We've got bigger things to worry about", but I feel it should be reworded slightly.
Maybe something like "Earth will have to wait"

What is the bigger threat? I assume you're trying to keep that a mystery which is cool, but maybe some sort of hint at what it is will spark some intrigue. For example, you could snap the camera to a dark silhouette of a mysterious figure for a split second after turning away from the Earth.

Everything else looks and sounds pretty good Hope that helps.

 

Thanks a lot for feedback.

Right, it should be more clear.

Good idea. I will probably do it in different way, but thanks for suggestion