Improvements?

This is the character model i have been working on so far, i would love some feedback as how i can improve the model. This will be updated as i receive feedback. Thanks

 

Anybody?

 

Hey Benopaluz,

I would not say you are a terrible modeller You managed to get a character on screen so you are well on your way.
As for improvements, I personally think the torso is to small compared to his hips, and the head is a bit small.

Those are the two things I notice about it, hope it helps

 

Thankyou! atleast somebody replied ahah i have been sitting here for the past 4 hours waiting.. anyway thankyou for your feedback ill will work on this straight away Also, i wanted the head a tad small because of a helmet going over the top ;P

 

neck is quite long, torso is a bit long too, also the character has no chest or lats which looks a bit odd with such a long torso

good start though, easy fixes

 

The way the polygons are on the chest appear to create unintentional nipples, which reminds me of that Batman movie. Also maybe bulk him up a little, he seems a bit thin/stretched in the torso area. Otherwise, good job!

 

Thanks for the feedback, i made some changes, wether for better or worse.

 

I would like chunkier plates but then it might be against your art style.

 

i do agree it needs to be "bulkier" and i would think bigger plates would solve this so thanks!

 

The only complaint I would have would be that the chest and stomach are skinner than the rather bloated lower-gut. Along with that, the helmet isn't shaped that much (sorta looks like a blob), but other than that, it looks rather nice.

All you need to do now is to add a decent cubemap to your visor and you'll have awesome reflectivity