Hobo Rich (Game Idea)

Hi guys,

I am new to game development and programming however I am currently studying the course. Anyway I would appreciate some feedback on what do you guys think about the game idea and what I can improve on

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Also I was thinking to get it working on PC first and than learn the movement script for mobile. For the game I will be adding more stuff such as jumping and so on.

Story behind the game

Its a Homeless man (aka hobo) who is on a journey to improve his live, he is able to do that by collecting coins and completing levels, than he is able to buy items from the store which are character unlocks such as a business man skin and so on. also what do you guys think about the name "Hobo Rich" I think its catchy but am not sure if people might find it offensive.

Thank you

 

Um..........I suppose at the end you could have some message like "Life on the streets isn't a game for over half a million US citizens." to have it raise awareness, along with an organization people can donate to, and of course donate a percentage of your profits.

Of course you might just want to do a different idea.

 

ahh ok thank you for your feedback, i know its sad that people have to live that way