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Hell Of Men : Blood Brothers

Discussion in 'Made With Unity' started by meTonne, Apr 11, 2019.

  1. meTonne

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  2. bComponent

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    Hi meTonne,

    unfortunatly I'm not convinced by the trailer. It's throwing me directly into very specific game mechanics and content. I'd rather see the general game idea ("this is a strategic simulation game") or something like this, to understand what it is about.

    Also, there are a lot of spelling and/or grammar mistakes in the video. I suggest putting much more afford into this. Coming from Germany myself it's not always easy to get everything right in a foreign language, but especially for promotion videos I'd put a lot into it to make it right.

    Other than that: keep it up, looking forward to seeing you progress with this game :)!
     
  3. meTonne

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    Hi bComponent !

    Your right many feedback have the same feeling about the trailer. I work on new one with gameplay. I hope that the second trailer will be better.

    :)
     
  4. meTonne

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    Hello !

    I did new trailer ! A gameplay trailer ! :)

     
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  5. bComponent

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    Wow, that looks much better! Now I get an idea of your game.
    Well done!
     
  6. spawnpoint2019

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    Hi bComponent!

    I like your work! I'd really want to try it out ... Your game is something similar to AOE. If you share beta build I'm up for it .I think I might give you some constructive feedback as I am a QA Game Tester.
    :)
    All the best for your project!
     
  7. meTonne

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    Thank you ! :D
     
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    At first glance, your gameplay reminds me of Age of Empires.
    So far everything looks cool. Just one suggestion.
    Change the music for the trailer next time.:D
     
  10. AwesomeNewbie

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    Yes, that trailer is much better!
     
  11. meTonne

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    Akira : Thanks, Yes I work on new trailer, all things have change since it. new terrain texture, new model for units, vehicles, many new feature ^^

    AwesomeNewby : thanks :)
     
  12. meTonne

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    New trailer for Early Access in September :)

     
  14. Antypodish

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    All look nice. But vid become quickly boring. You show at beginning some little gameplay, then few unit action. Then one to one unit fight. And the next, maps fly through for rest halve of the vid. While maps look nice, there should be fight raging on. Probably in few places at the same time. And bit of tactical management. Jumping with camera left to right doesn't feel to me right.
     
  15. meTonne

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    Thank for your answers ! I take note for the next one ^^
     
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    New trailer ! :)
     
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