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Hell Of Men : Blood Brothers

Discussion in 'Made With Unity' started by meTonne, Apr 11, 2019.

  1. meTonne

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  2. bComponent

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    Hi meTonne,

    unfortunatly I'm not convinced by the trailer. It's throwing me directly into very specific game mechanics and content. I'd rather see the general game idea ("this is a strategic simulation game") or something like this, to understand what it is about.

    Also, there are a lot of spelling and/or grammar mistakes in the video. I suggest putting much more afford into this. Coming from Germany myself it's not always easy to get everything right in a foreign language, but especially for promotion videos I'd put a lot into it to make it right.

    Other than that: keep it up, looking forward to seeing you progress with this game :)!
     
  3. meTonne

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    Hi bComponent !

    Your right many feedback have the same feeling about the trailer. I work on new one with gameplay. I hope that the second trailer will be better.

    :)
     
  4. meTonne

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    Hello !

    I did new trailer ! A gameplay trailer ! :)

     
  5. bComponent

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    Wow, that looks much better! Now I get an idea of your game.
    Well done!
     
  6. spawnpoint2019

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    Hi bComponent!

    I like your work! I'd really want to try it out ... Your game is something similar to AOE. If you share beta build I'm up for it .I think I might give you some constructive feedback as I am a QA Game Tester.
    :)
    All the best for your project!
     
  7. meTonne

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