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Discussion in 'Works In Progress - Archive' started by yavadoo, Mar 26, 2012.

  1. yavadoo

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    Just a few screenshoots of my first game for iOS.

    Its going to be a kind of a Dualstickshooter but there will be also areas where you just have to avoid obstacles (falling stones etc.).

    It will have 12 Levels.
    I already "blocked out" 11 Levels and have about 50% of the gamelogic.
    One prototype level is has already the final, textured meshes in it (Thats where the screenshots are made from).
     

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  2. brandon199511

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    I like the style, Keep it up :)
     
  3. StormGamer

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    no way this is your first game!
    i study blender and unity for about 5-9 months and still can´t create something like that!
    KEEP IT UP BUDDY!
     
  4. aixaix

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    yeah, logotom has a point here!
    Only few can create such a game on the first time!
    by the way, a webplayer would be awesome!
     
  5. StormGamer

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    We want webplayer!
     
  6. Fu11English

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    Looks great. Is it an Animal Crossing type game?
     
  7. yavadoo

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    Thank you guys for your comments.

    @logotom, aixaix
    Its my first game. I am working on it since a while (around 4 months). And this is just the first level, there is still much to do.
    And sorry, I cant provide a webplayer, its going to be an Iphone game. I implemented no controls for a keyboard. I am thinking about a youtube video. I let you know when its done.

    @Beyond Basic Games
    Its going to be a game similar to guerilla bob. But the little guy (its supposed to be a postman) has to deliver letters to the mailboxes and getting chased by the evil chickens. I still dont know, if he should shoot chickens ( a postman with a gun?) or beat them down somehow.
     
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  8. StormGamer

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    cool when you launch a video send me a link i would love to watch!
     
  9. thellama

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    Very solid world art, good colors, nice texture to all the objects and great style on the trees and plants, but those character feel totally out of place with the rest of the style.

    That chicken is totally boss though.
     
  10. yavadoo

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    @logotom

    Sure I ll let you know when I have done this.

    @TheLlama
    Thanks for your comment. Could you give me a hint, what do you mean with "out of place"? What would you change?

    I also have to admit the house in the first screenshot I bought in the asset store. Its the cartoony house with the yellow roof for 5 bucks.
    I changed the texture and the windows.
     
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  11. Fishermen

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    holy moly!
    my first game didn't look this good
     
  12. rqpaine

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    give the postman a set of weapons as such:

    swing bag or newspaper to 'smack' them back a bit
    a can of spray that makes them harmless and run in circles for a bit crying
    a taser that zaps them and makes them stunned
    a fold out trap that catches them

    just some thoughts, but should do it, gives you some nice common sense options, hitting them with a rolled up paper or the mail bag is a good default weapon
    the pepper spray gives a nive arc attack pattern in front and the taser a decent short range weapon, a trap you can drop, like the fold up wire kind are small and simple, easy enough to carry a few.
     
  13. yavadoo

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    Thanks for the input rqpaine. I really like the idea of the swinging, rolled up newspaper. Thats the appropriate weapon for a postman.
     
  14. MellowNinja

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    I've got to admit, this is amazing ! the colours go very well together but as TheLlama said the characters seem to be out of place maybe make them more smooth and better textures ?
     
  15. yavadoo

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    Just added a new screenshot and a few infos in the first post.
     
  16. Ianicm

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    Looks great! Very good job and idea...weapons? He could just throw "Letters" or "packages" at them ...ninja style :)
     
  17. yavadoo

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    Thanks amuse, I really like the "package throwing ninja style" idea :)
     
  18. LeakySink

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    The art looks great, would love a demo!
     
  19. rextr09

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    cute graphics! keep up the good work
     
  20. OmniverseProduct

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    I agree. If this is your first game, amazing job!
     
  21. yavadoo

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    Thank you.

    Even if it is going to be an iOS game I am thinking about to build a webplayer version.
     
  22. yavadoo

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    Added drafts of the postman. I am still very unsecure about the main character.
     

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  23. Torsh

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    Very cool! Keep up the good work.
     
  24. rhasami

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    like it. very nice colors (maybe the green i to intense)
    postmans are both cute....maybe mix it some how.... first one looks to childish
     
  25. snowconesolid

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    I really like the graphics. They remind me of a classic ps1 game.

    keep it up :)
     
  26. Rush-Rage-Games

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    Love the art!
     
  27. Andyboy359

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    Dude this looks awesome! Please make a web player :)
     
  28. ShadoX

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    I second that! :)
     
  29. yavadoo

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    Just updated infos and added this new screenshots in the first post:



    Have a nice day :D
     
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  30. ppan

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    Graphic looks cool so far.
     
  31. bucco

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    omfg.... it looks so great!

    Looking forward to the video...

    If you can, can you please make a webplayer version? PLZ?

    Great job!
     
  32. yavadoo

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    Thanks bucco.
    I am going to make a webplayer as soon as possible.
     
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  33. Anazoth

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    Cute, I love it! The only thing that i would change is the bright green outline of the word mail ^_^ Can't wait to see it's progress.
     
  34. Gabriel_D

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    looks amazing so far
     
  35. yavadoo

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    Thanks guys,

    Anazoth, you are right. The green looks strange, actually it should be a yellow, like the "outlines" of the mailbox.
     
  36. rhasami

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    I like it very much, very very nice graphics. You are talented. Like dreamworks.

    Cant wait to see the final result.
     
  37. jister

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    environment looks awesome, characters i don't like that much. I can see they need to be styled but now they look a bit to plain compared to your environment design.
    I would give'm more character, bit more definition...
    example:
    http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/1058/anoandpepperlp.jpg
     
  38. Prion Games

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    I agree.