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Eva - Void Pirate - WIP Mixamo contest entry

Discussion in 'Works In Progress - Archive' started by straszak, Apr 20, 2012.

  1. straszak

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    HI,

    I have decided to join the battle ! Please have a look at my take on Void Pirate and say what do you think!
    Still lots of work to do and I don't know if I will manage on time as I just find out about the contest.

    I will add proper heavy boots for her and something like a glove to non cybernetic arm.

    Thanks,
     

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  2. shaderbytes

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    looks great so far , Im wondering if the knee area looks a bit thin? Anyway good luck on making the deadline and nice to see another entry ;)
     
  3. yavadoo

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    Very, very beautiful, cant wait to see her with hairs and texture.
    Maybe the pants stuck a little to deep in her a... :)
    Don't know how to describe, you know what I mean?
     
  4. straszak

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    I have sketched up boots for her. Still not 100% sure about them but it will do for a start.
    What do you guys think ? $PirateScreenBoots.jpg
     
  5. Origin

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    Looks like a good start man. I also think the lower legs appears to be a bit small. I am curious to see where you go with the arm. :)
     
  6. straszak

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    Hello again.

    Here is a little update on her. Still lots to do but I am happy with the progress so far. I have
    added boots and change knee a little bit as well.
    Comments welcome. Thanks.
     

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  7. shaderbytes

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  8. DigiLusionist

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    Me likey!
     
  9. straszak

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    HI ,

    Here is update on her. I have manage to finish low poly version and did some test normal map bake.
    Here is the result. Still need to redo UVs and bake it properly. And then texture her up.
    So far I am happy with the results. What do you guys think ?
     

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  10. virror

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    Looks very good, not cluttered with details, simple but great : )
    Also i like the new boots a lot better than the original ones.
     
  11. shaderbytes

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    looking forward to textures and spec map now ;)
     
  12. Mixamo

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    Looking epic please keep going!
     
  13. straszak

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    Hello again,

    I have started texturing now. Normal map is baked and working on diffuse texture now.
    Still need to do the hair but that I will leave for the end just in case I run out of time.

    Here is picture update. Hope you like it!
     

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  14. Schlumpfsack

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    i love the model and especialy texturework
     
  15. Mixamo

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  16. shaderbytes

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    fantastic stuff , would you mind posting a wireframe of your lowpoly model if you have time please? do you have a website/portfolio where I can see more of your work?
     
  17. straszak

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    Hi,


    A little update on texture. It is race against time now unfortunetly. I wish I had more time :).
    Anyway here is render. Hope you like it.

    I didn't had time to take wireframe shot yet sorry. I will post it when find some time to do it.
     

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  18. NomadKing

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    Wow, looks really impressive straszak. Great work :)
     
  19. Zethariel1

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    Reminds me of Jack from ME3. Very nicelly done, fingers crossed you manage to polish it up in time :)
     
  20. straszak

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    Hi guys. I have played a little bit with pose for her. Here what I came up for now.
    What do you guys think ? Mind it just a test for now.
     

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  21. yung

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    Nice work so far, mate! About your pose, I think you should really try to push her curves. Try rotating her spine more, so that there's a natural curve going along the body. The limbs will follow.

    An example would be something like this, (not the actual pose, but the curves).

    Hope this helps. Best of luck!

     
  22. win XD

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    nice progress pal! keep it up! cant wait to see the final.
    And i agree with yung that will be a great help.
     
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  23. straszak

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    I have added hair to her finally.!

    Here you have wireframe of the model. I have portfolio website www.tom-3d-art.com but it is not updated for long time.
     

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  24. shaderbytes

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    Thanks for the wireframe and link , very impressive. Hair on the model is looking shweeet!
     
  25. straszak

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    I think I'm done. Today maybe will do few more tweaks after work but it pretty much it.
    I have also posted in on polycount so feel free to comment on there as well.

    Hope you like it.

     
  26. Crosstopher

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    Holy crap! Sexy and dangerous, reminds me a little of Jack from ME, well done!
     
  27. NomadKing

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    The new pose really shows off the model. Nice job :)
     
  28. marcos

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    Great pose and model!
     
  29. 3dviewpoint

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    Looking great! Pose textures are sweet. Best of luck to you
     
  30. Mixamo

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    Don't forget to submit!
     
  31. win XD

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    nice job pal! looking very nice!
     
  32. straszak

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    Yeah. I just did final tweaks and have submitted it! Are we getting any confirmation that you have got it? Wouldn't want it to get lost in post!!!
     
  33. Mixamo

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    Great news, the Contest has been extended based on contestants requesting more time. We've agreed to end the contest by one week.

    The new END DATE is MAY 4th @ 11:59PM PST

    If you have already submitted feel free to refine the entry and resubmit! Otherwise, we'll see you at the end of the contest!