Hi, I am trying to design a mobile game for someone. Long story short, I am looking for a little advice. Like the title implies, I don't have much experience, but, I do know I bit about what makes a good game, and what breaks one. Now, I have had dozens of ideas for games, but this is the first time I have needed to be through. So that you know what I am trying to do, let me do a little explaining. First, he told me to just worry about it being able to make money, and that its fun. I decided to go with a 2D adventure platformer with some online multiplayer stuff, and a mix between static levels and randomly generated levels. I have done a lot so far but I do want a little advice before I send this to him. Last thing, I am not really worried about the writing for the story (stories in the case) because I am a writer and I know a lot of others.