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Codecks OCD Nitpicks

Discussion in 'Open Projects' started by shuttle127, Oct 1, 2020.

  1. shuttle127

    shuttle127

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    Just few small documentation nitpicks:

    • Game design wiki -> Bard Hare: lyrical* skills, not lirical
    • Game design wiki -> Story: Plot sentence overly wordy/unclear - but traced back its* NOT but it traced back (assuming it here is the pig chef, unneeded in the sentence)
    • Game flow -> (X.) State Name: missing the Audio sub-section as used in (1.) The arrival; also missing from (2.) First encounter
     
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  2. cirocontinisio

    cirocontinisio

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    Thanks! I fixed the typos.

    Regarding this, I was restructuring the cards and didn't intend to leave the audio in there. The card (1.) The arrival describes a state and not a location, so I don't think it makes to include the audio. This would be weird in later chapters that take place across multiple locations.

    I might (and I should) add audio description to environment cards though, like The Beach.
     
  3. shuttle127

    shuttle127

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    Ah, gotcha, makes sense.

    Speaking of audio description, was curious about the tone/feel of the game. I know it’s supposed to be family friendly, is it going to be goofy, serious, or somewhere in between? Apologies if this has already been answered elsewhere.
     
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  4. ironCookie

    ironCookie

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    Hi everyone,

    @shuttle127 unfortunately, I do not have an answer for you. I think the tone will be more obvious when the game has reached a playable state.

    Now, back to my main intention.
    Instead of creating a new thread, I want to make my suggestions right here. I hope, that nobody is offended.

    I think, that all existing and upcoming cards on https://open.codecks.io/unity-open-project-1 should include a link to the "official" forum threads.

    This might reduce the amount of threads and the time to search for a specific topic in the long run.