Code Busters 2.0

Hey guys. I really liked that old thread we had where we would post some code and other users would criticize and examine it. So I want to start that thread up again. Here are the rules:

1. If you want to break down someone's code, you must post a code sample of your own as well.
2. Don't put scripts that are very long and annoying to read. Use [.Code][/Code] tags to format your code.
3. To keep things clean, please use this format:
Code Review - @Username
..... etc


Review My Code (Reviewed / Not Reviewed):
..... etc

Please do not do a reply and have the entire script posted again on your post. Instead, reply to certain lines of code and comment on those. Do not put the entire script in the reply for the sake of being neat.