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[Android] Ball Breaks 3d - New Arkanoid 3D

Discussion in 'Made With Unity' started by Blade04009, Oct 12, 2018.

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Please estimate my first game

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  1. Blade04009

    Blade04009

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    Ball Breaks 3D

    It is modern arkanoid with the platform and a the ball in 3D!

    To break 3D bricks by means of a ball and receive unusual bonuses!
    To destroy constructions of bricks and receive for it points!
    Also remember, the more cubes you will break for time, the receive more points and appear in a top of leaders!​


    Features of a game:
    ★ 3D graphics
    ★ Remarkable music and sound effects
    ★ Plenty of unique levels
    ★ Amazing bonuses
    ★ Several types of balls
    ★ Realtime physical destruction
    ★ 4 ways of control of the platform​
     
  2. Blade04009

    Blade04009

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    I just done some update for my game and I would like to know your opinions and suggestions. What more features can I add to game?

    Updating of the version to 1.1

    What's new:
    ♦ 3 new chapters (15 new levels) are added
    ♦ The new bonus "Inversion" is added
    ♦ The new bonus "Explosion of bricks" is added
    ♦ The new bonus "Plasma gun" is added
    ♦ The new bonus "Random bonus" is added
    ♦ Display of the version number of a game in the main menu is added
     
  3. AkiraWong89

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    Firstly, congratulations on your very first game released.
    As a first project, this looks quite good already.
    This game reminds me of a PC game long time ago - Strike Ball 3.
    The graphic and vibe feels very close to the game.

    The most parts needed to be improved is the art direction.
    It's almost 2019, no need to be PBR quality but at least decent.
    Gaming mobile devices keep rapidly releasing nowadays.
    Hence you can more audaciously play around the graphics.
    • Brings down the color saturation and contrast a bit to looks more natural.
    • Bake static lightmap for each level or use a real-time directional light is better.
    • Everything looks flat. You can use vertex painting for fake ambient occlusion.
    • Scrolling background looks rigid, more layers variation is awesome.
    • Effects looks sleepy, try to add mobile screen effects, camera shake etc...
    • Bonus icon design too dark. The "Material" feeling is not right.
    • Most importantly, your app icon looks not attractive and feels cheap.
    I told every mobile game developers this: App icon is the soul of your product.
    People want to try it or not, totally depend on this icon by searching on the store.
    This is packaging, like the box when you buy a new phone etc...

    Keep it up.;)
     
  4. Blade04009

    Blade04009

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    Thanks for your response, I'll think of your words :)
     
  5. GarBenjamin

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    I really like how this game looks. Seems very visually interesting to me. Colorful. Very readable. Nice layout. Interesting view.

    I wasn't able to play it because it just kept saying I needed to log into play account (or something like that) and I never do that nor do I give any game I test permissions to access my files, photos, contacts, etc. Often a game will still work anyway. But this one just kept throwing the message up again and again.

    So my first suggestion for improvement would be to remove that. BUT it might be that is how you monetized your game and need people to login due to IAP. I only play mobile games to do testing for my fellow gamedevs so not really your target market anyway. BUT the fact that when I watched the video I thought "now this is how to make an Arkanoid style game with some character... making it uniquely yours" and actually wanted to try it is worth mentioning.
     
  6. Blade04009

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    Thanks for your response :)
    I'm sorry that you couldn't try my game :(
    My game works with services of Google and uses authentication of Google Play. You must create account of Google Play then you can run my game.
    If the mistake still appears, try to clean data of application. I hope that it will help you ;)
     
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  7. GarBenjamin

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    Thanks.