A Day | Short storyteller

A Day is a short story telling game. The game is about a boy who doesn't seem to be doing well with getting his dream girl he has a crush on. He doesn't seem to see her very often, only at certain events, like parties. He has a hard time starting a relationship with her, but he's trying.

http://extraterrestrialearth.weebly.com/downloads.html

This is basically my first game, that has a storyline.
So please be gentle with your critiques, but still leave them!